金盏倒垂莲 览木兰山木兰天池

姚文长

金盏倒垂莲 览木兰山木兰天池（通韵）

2023.12.4

    登木兰山，瞰沿江平地，盛显王畿。胜景西陵，佛道瑞光曦。有少女、男妆征战，赴军为父出击。屡建懋绩，皇封孝烈称奇。    天池峡深谷静，赏峰清水秀，瀑布飞激。浪漫沟溪，潭岛怪石依。岸脚下、文朴村镇，以河成市桥低。岭顶寨子，门楣刻镂花迷。

冯老1944

好词。

李听圃

360智脑汉译英
Marigold inverted lotus, view of Mulan Tianchi in Mulan Mountain (Tongyun) 2023.12.4
Climb Mulan Mountain, overlooking the plains along the river, and see the royal palace in full bloom.
The scenic Xiling, the auspicious light of Buddhism and Taoism.
There are girls and boys dressing up for war and going to the army to fight for their fathers.
He has made great achievements many times, and was praised by the emperor for his filial piety.
Tianchi Gorge has deep and quiet valleys, beautiful peaks, clear water, and rapid waterfalls.
The romantic ditch and stream are surrounded by strange rocks on Tan Island.
At the foot of the bank, there are Wenpu villages and towns, and the river forms the city and the bridge is low.
The lintel of the village on the top of the mountain is carved with flowers.

李听圃

360智脑评语
以上诗歌描述了登临木兰山和游览木兰天池的景色和历史背景。木兰山是一座著名的佛教名山，有着悠久的历史和文化底蕴。在木兰天池，可以欣赏到峰清水秀、瀑布飞激的美景，还可以了解到当地的历史和文化，如孝烈称奇等传说。同时，诗中也展现了诗人对大自然美景的赞叹和对历史文化的尊重。

李听圃

360智脑的同题诗
金盏倒垂莲，盛开在木兰山巅，
俯瞰大地，美景尽收眼底间。
佛教名山，木兰天池，水秀山清，
瀑布飞激，潭岛怪石，景色如画。

少女征战，为父出击，屡建懋绩，
孝烈称奇，英勇无畏，让人敬仰。
历史沉淀，文化瑰宝，尽展木兰之美。

登山远眺，心旷神怡，身心愉悦，
游览其间，感受大自然之神奇。
金盏倒垂莲，盛开在木兰山巅，
让我们一同领略这壮丽的美景。

姚文长

冯老1944 发表于 2023-12-18 16:57
好词。

谢谢夸赞！祝好运！

姚文长

李听圃 发表于 2023-12-19 00:02
360智脑的同题诗
金盏倒垂莲，盛开在木兰山巅，
俯瞰大地，美景尽收眼底间。

谢谢！祝好运！